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All umbrellas were sold then
Cold and nervy we are
Cheerful, magnificent colours
Visitors throwing money
Rio 2016
Heavy breathing souls
Running, Jumping, Swimming fast
Getting really high
All nations coming to watch
A time of fun in Rio 2016
By Hudson
Kia orana Mrs Rolton and hi,
ReplyDeleteI really like your poem and your pictures. I liked the photo of the Rio 2016, it looks really nice. The sentence that says visitors throwing money was funny I was like “what”, I showed my freind and he laughed hard out.
Kind regards
Nav
http://rangikura-sb-navarone.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi Hudson, my name is Philip. I am interested in this particular post because our classes main topic is also on the Rio olympics, we also have the “Rio olympics” in our homework!. My favourite sport in the Rio olympics is swimming because we are having our swimming sports tomorrow. I also like your creativity on making the poems just using your brain.
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Philip
http://rangikura-sb-philip.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi Room 15 hero team,
ReplyDeleteI like your guys 2016 Rio olympics poem because we are searching up on the Rio olympics in our class to. The thing you need to work on is to write some facts you know on the Rio olympics. The thing I like the most about this poem is that you have the picture of the olympics on your guys blog for the world to see that you are working on the olympics.
From: Kapree
My blog: kapree @ Rangikura
My class blog: Room 10 @ Rangikura
Hi Hudson My name is Eraia. I like how you did a poem about Rio 2016. And I also like how you are using interesting words to describe the olympics. And what they are doing.
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Hi Hudson
ReplyDeleteI like your poem that you made. It is really good… Also something that I like about it is that you put something about the Olympic in it and that you also wrote about when you sold your umbrellas. Something you need to work on is putting more details in it. What I liked about it is when you put a Olympic picture.
Kind regards: Saima
http://rangikura-sb-samia.blogspot.co.nz/
http://rangikura-cb-room10.blogspot.co.nz/
Checked by: Kapree Memphis
Rio 2016
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Running, Jumping, Swimming fast
Getting really high
All nations coming to watch
A time of fun in Rio 2016
Hi Jasmine, my name is Kyara. I like your poem it is so cool, and you also have the right punctuation in your poem. I like the part when you said heavy breathing souls. My favourite word is nations because it represents your country and our country.
I have a questions for you and your class:
How did your class come up with this poem?
Heavy breathing souls
ReplyDeleteRunning, Jumping, Swimming fast
Getting really high
All nations coming to watch
A time of fun in Rio 2016
HI I really like the thing you posted on your blog and I really like how you put nice words like running , jumping and heavy breathing souls. The thing that I really like is how you posted Rio 2016.
Kind regards Ben.
Hi my name is Matatia and I am going to comment on your lovely blog.
ReplyDeleteI love the Oympics 2016 because there is a lot of stuff to do there like soccer, rugby, volleyball and other stuff. My favourite sports are rugby and volleyball. I really love this peom because the people in the olympics never give up, just like in my class. I just love this beautiful olympics poem.
Kinds Regards
Matatia
http://rangikura-sb-matatial.blogspot.co.nz/
kia ora I’m Patrick from Room 10. Me and my family were watching the olympics. It was fun watching Usain bolt running to reach the finish line i liked the bit when Usain bolt done his pose before he went to the finish line. I enjoy your poem.
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