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I really enjoyed reading your poem. I love the bit when you wrote colours are streaming, I can see it in my head, lots of colourful umbrellas surrounding the area. I also loved the bit when you said exhausted waiters gave out food, I can imagine the waiters running back and forth huffing and puffing as people are waiting for their food.
Hi Andrew my name is Sonia,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your poem. I love the bit when you wrote colours are streaming, I can see it in my head, lots of colourful umbrellas surrounding the area. I also loved the bit when you said exhausted waiters gave out food, I can imagine the waiters running back and forth huffing and puffing as people are waiting for their food.
Kind Regards Sonia
http://rangikura-sb-sonia.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi Andrew, I'm Joe from bayfield school,
ReplyDeleteYour poem was great I liked the first line, colours streaming.I also liked the bit about thrilled and anxious people were scared, so visually amazing.
From Joe
http://rimubayfield.blogspot.co.nz/