Tanka Poems
Silent Art Auction Tanka
Poem
Tonight
we had fun
We
raised a lot of money
We
sold umbrellas
We
had an amazing time
It
was the best night ever
Tui Tanka Poem
Cutest
dog ever
She is fun to play with
She
sleeps all day long
She
loves to play all day long
She
is a really fast runner
By Andie
Hi Andy I'm Mya and I found your poem very interesting,
ReplyDeleteI have dogs that do the same thing, sleep all day, are really fast runners and are also really fun to play with.
Here is a poem that I write about my dogs:
They are funny dogs to hang out with
They love to sleep all day
They like to be playful
They are fast runners
From Mya
http://rangikura-sb-mya.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi I am Havana, I am from Rangikura school. That dog sounds lovely, I think she sounds very playful and energetic. I would love to see her and play with her.
ReplyDeleteQuestions
What is her name?
How old is she?
What colour is she?
By Havana
http://rangikura-sb-havana.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi my name is Ben. I like looking at poems what I really like to do is read some and hear the rhymes. Sometimes I put it into raps and hear myself rap some poems. What I like about your story is she is a really fast runner i’m pretty fast at running. I think you're really good at poems that's why i’m commenting to see if you are good.
ReplyDeleteKind regards
Ben
http://rangikura-sb-bent.blogspot.co.nz/