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Hi my name is Matatia and I am commenting on your guys blog. I reaaly love your poem because you said that the wrinkled trucks are swinging I love the way you said wrinkled. It inspired me to comment on your blog because I like elephants.
Hi Im Ben and i'm commenting on your blog. I like your poem because you put in some good words like tusks and some other good words. It inspired me to comment on your blog because I like elephants.
Kind regards Ben http://rangikura-sb-bent.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi my name is Matatia and I am commenting on your guys blog. I reaaly love your poem because you said that the wrinkled trucks are swinging I love the way you said wrinkled. It inspired me to comment on your blog because I like elephants.
Thank you, for sharing your information about you spine poems. I like the way you put Enormous ears and not just big. I Did not know what ivory was until i asked some people.
Hi Jasminei, my name is Eraia I like how you describe when the elephant enormous ears flapping. Ivory tusk guarding so when people come to attack they can use their truck to defend them selfe.
Hello Mrs Rolton,
ReplyDeleteThis is a great peice of writing, we really enjoyed reading your spine poem, it was great.
From Room 15 Jordyn and Locky.
Hi my name is Matatia and I am commenting on your guys blog. I reaaly love your poem because you said that the wrinkled trucks are swinging I love the way you said wrinkled. It inspired me to comment on your blog because I like elephants.
ReplyDeleteKind regards
Matatia
http://rangikura-sb-matatial.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi Im Ben and i'm commenting on your blog. I like your poem because you put in some good words like tusks and some other good words. It inspired me to comment on your blog because I like elephants.
ReplyDeleteKind regards
Ben
http://rangikura-sb-bent.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi my name is Matatia and I am commenting on your guys blog. I reaaly love your poem because you said that the wrinkled trucks are swinging I love the way you said wrinkled. It inspired me to comment on your blog because I like elephants.
ReplyDeleteKind regards
Matatia
http://rangikura-sb-matatial.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi Jasmine, i’m Malcolm,
ReplyDeleteThank you, for sharing your information about you spine poems. I like the way you put Enormous ears and not just big. I Did not know what ivory was until i asked some people.
Kind regards
Malcolm
http://rangikura-sb-malcolm.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi Jasminei, my name is Eraia I like how you describe when the elephant enormous ears flapping.
ReplyDeleteIvory tusk guarding so when people come to attack they can use their truck to defend them selfe.
http://rangikura-sb-eraia.blogspot.co.nz/