100 Word Challenge
Vroom! The plane lands at the
Bundi airport. Greg jumps off and makes his way through the airport and buys a
ticket for the bus to McDonalds.
Along the way the bus breaks down and all the
passengers have to make their way off. Greg finds a nice bench to sit on and
read his book on.
While he was reading a bronze coloured man walked over and
sat on the bench as soon as he sat down he went as solid as a rock. Greg says
to him “hello”, he answers back, “nice to meet you”.
By Jasper
Hello Jasper,
ReplyDeleteYou are very talented, your use of adjectives is great, I think it was a really good story and without them it would be a boring story. I think that you are very creative, writing about a bronze man would be very hard.
Great story Jasper, from Locky.
To Jasper,
ReplyDeleteCool story Jasper, we really liked your onomatopoeia. Your story was really interesting to read and it was also creative. We both enjoyed reading your story.
Nice work Jasper
from Hudson and Jaim
Hi my name is David and I am commenting on your post.
ReplyDeleteI really like your blog, I feel really interested in writing a poem right now
Kind regards
David :-)
Here's my blog
http://rangikura-cb-room10.blogspot.co.nz/